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		<title>By: Kevin</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-298134</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Dec 2008 20:24:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Donace: 
I can&#039;t contact you via your contact form at The Nexus.  The captcha isn&#039;t displaying.  Can you contact me via my contact form at ToMuse or PM at the Blogging Tips forum?  I can then give you download access to the plugin. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Donace:</p>
<p>I can&#39;t contact you via your contact form at The Nexus.  The captcha isn&#39;t displaying.  Can you contact me via my contact form at ToMuse or PM at the Blogging Tips forum?  I can then give you download access to the plugin.</p>
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		<title>By: Donace</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-297422</link>
		<dc:creator>Donace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Dec 2008 03:11:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>sweet I was actually considering the possible uses of that plugin as well :p </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>sweet I was actually considering the possible uses of that plugin as well :p</p>
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		<title>By: Rarst</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-297342</link>
		<dc:creator>Rarst</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Dec 2008 00:10:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Kevin 
 
Thanks and good luck with improving your blog! :) </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Kevin</p>
<p>Thanks and good luck with improving your blog! <img src='http://www.bloggingtips.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Kevin</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-297227</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Dec 2008 19:57:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I would like to say thanks to everyone for the helpful suggestions.  I am already updating the site based on your remarks. 
 
While there were several participants that provided excellent reviews, I found Rarst&#039;s to be he most thorough and detailed and therefore he is the winner.   
 
Donace&#039;s review was a close second and because it was such a great effort I would like to give him a brand spanking new plugin that we just developed called Widget Locationizer.  It gives you total control over your widgets by letting you assign post/page IDs, tags, and categories for which it will appear.  It essentially makes your widgets smarter permitting better ad targeting.  You can find it here if you&#039;re interested:  &lt;a href=&quot;http://tomuse.com/wordpress/widget-locationizer&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;http://tomuse.com/wordpress/widget-locationizer&lt;/a&gt;  
 
Thanks again everyone! </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would like to say thanks to everyone for the helpful suggestions.  I am already updating the site based on your remarks.</p>
<p>While there were several participants that provided excellent reviews, I found Rarst&#39;s to be he most thorough and detailed and therefore he is the winner.  </p>
<p>Donace&#39;s review was a close second and because it was such a great effort I would like to give him a brand spanking new plugin that we just developed called Widget Locationizer.  It gives you total control over your widgets by letting you assign post/page IDs, tags, and categories for which it will appear.  It essentially makes your widgets smarter permitting better ad targeting.  You can find it here if you&#39;re interested:  <a href="http://tomuse.com/wordpress/widget-locationizer" rel="nofollow">http://tomuse.com/wordpress/widget-locationizer</a>  </p>
<p>Thanks again everyone!</p>
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		<title>By: Reader Blog Critique : Techie-Buzz.com</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-295855</link>
		<dc:creator>Reader Blog Critique : Techie-Buzz.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Dec 2008 13:00:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] to the 15th Reader Blog Critique. Last weeks critique of ToMuse.com generated some discussion but most of it was regarding the themes feedburner [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] to the 15th Reader Blog Critique. Last weeks critique of ToMuse.com generated some discussion but most of it was regarding the themes feedburner [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Kevin</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-295187</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 16:19:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rarst: 
Thanks so much for all the great recommendations and detail!  So many things to address.  I am very appreciative. 
 
Syed: 
Thank you, I will remove the tags display and rethink the ads. 
 
Donace: 
I caught your review in the forum, thanks! 
 
The Geek: 
Thanks for the likes, its nice to hear what works too :)  I will address the gaps, remove the tags display on homepage and archives (gets rid of subscription links too).  Thank you for the encouragement as well! </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rarst:</p>
<p>Thanks so much for all the great recommendations and detail!  So many things to address.  I am very appreciative.</p>
<p>Syed:</p>
<p>Thank you, I will remove the tags display and rethink the ads.</p>
<p>Donace:</p>
<p>I caught your review in the forum, thanks!</p>
<p>The Geek:</p>
<p>Thanks for the likes, its nice to hear what works too <img src='http://www.bloggingtips.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   I will address the gaps, remove the tags display on homepage and archives (gets rid of subscription links too).  Thank you for the encouragement as well!</p>
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		<title>By: The Geek</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-295119</link>
		<dc:creator>The Geek</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 14:46:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My humble opinions below... I&#039;m writing before reading other comments so some things may be repeated... and I&#039;m no expert. 
 
Likes: 
~Colors... good contrast, easy to read 
~variety of posts, screen shots, and videos, seems original and well thought out 
~pages load quick 
~Categories on sidebar 
 
Dislikes: 
~too busy... where is the content? 
~header is sparse and hard to  
~gaps between posts, feels like something is missing or didn&#039;t load 
~too many &#039;subscription&#039; links, it&#039;s overload 
~difficult to determine the purpose of this blog 
 
Keep at it!  It&#039;s a great start! </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My humble opinions below&#8230; I&#39;m writing before reading other comments so some things may be repeated&#8230; and I&#39;m no expert.</p>
<p>Likes:</p>
<p>~Colors&#8230; good contrast, easy to read</p>
<p>~variety of posts, screen shots, and videos, seems original and well thought out</p>
<p>~pages load quick</p>
<p>~Categories on sidebar</p>
<p>Dislikes:</p>
<p>~too busy&#8230; where is the content?</p>
<p>~header is sparse and hard to </p>
<p>~gaps between posts, feels like something is missing or didn&#39;t load</p>
<p>~too many &#39;subscription&#39; links, it&#39;s overload</p>
<p>~difficult to determine the purpose of this blog</p>
<p>Keep at it!  It&#39;s a great start!</p>
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		<title>By: Rarst has cool feed</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-295028</link>
		<dc:creator>Rarst has cool feed</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 11:00:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Donace 
 
Kick Kevin (BloggingTips one) in email, Akismet here kills long comments all the time lately. 
 
btw I heard AllInOneSEO is still supported, changed developer or something like that. Last update was in end of October. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Donace</p>
<p>Kick Kevin (BloggingTips one) in email, Akismet here kills long comments all the time lately.</p>
<p>btw I heard AllInOneSEO is still supported, changed developer or something like that. Last update was in end of October.</p>
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		<title>By: Donace</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294954</link>
		<dc:creator>Donace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 08:05:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>seems like askimet caught my longer comment...posted in the forum thread though </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>seems like askimet caught my longer comment&#8230;posted in the forum thread though</p>
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		<title>By: Syed Balkhi</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294928</link>
		<dc:creator>Syed Balkhi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 07:08:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think that ads in between the posts gotta go or need to be smaller than that. Site loads fine for me, but I am on a fast internet connection. I personally am not a fan of displaying the tags that I used in a post because they take extra space. I would remove that if I were you. I would also work on writing custom excerpts. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think that ads in between the posts gotta go or need to be smaller than that. Site loads fine for me, but I am on a fast internet connection. I personally am not a fan of displaying the tags that I used in a post because they take extra space. I would remove that if I were you. I would also work on writing custom excerpts.</p>
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		<title>By: Donace</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294558</link>
		<dc:creator>Donace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 18:17:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>woops forgot 2 other things 
 
archives I noticed 
 
 
 
No follow them! and secondly consider moving from allinoneseo to platinum seo as allinone is no longer supported while platinum is, </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>woops forgot 2 other things</p>
<p>archives I noticed</p>
<p>No follow them! and secondly consider moving from allinoneseo to platinum seo as allinone is no longer supported while platinum is,</p>
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		<title>By: Rarst has cool feed</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294524</link>
		<dc:creator>Rarst has cool feed</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 17:45:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ok, got to it at last. New blog for me, fresh impressions. 
 
First impression - and content is where?.. 
Second impression - oh, content is that tiny thing between the ads! :) 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Answering questions&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
1. It has too many stuff going on at the same time. Impression of a mess where you don&#039;t really see what is good and what is bad. 
 
2. Sit with pencil and draw meaningful layout. 
 
3. Page itself is reasonable but amount of script (31 script, 400+Kb) is not. 
 
4. No. Categories block in sidebar is to dependent on script, at first I thought it was non-functional demo. Took it some time to start working.  
 
Tags are overused, there is no system to them and too many similar ones. Recent post has three different variations with g1 for example. 
 
Comparing to original theme header and footer areas that are supposed to help with navigation are changed to advertisement instead. 
 
5. It&#039;s insane. I counted eleven huge ad blocks on home page. On post pages more reasonable but still ad-heavy. 
 
&lt;strong&gt;General notes&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
6. Doesn&#039;t validate. And it&#039;s not like usual few things missing, it&#039;s like over three hundred errors. &lt;a href=&quot;http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://tomuse.com/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://tomuse.c...&lt;/a&gt;  
 
7. Scripts. It took few minutes for browser to finish digesting scripts and actually start working as intended. 
 
8. It kinda has two taglines and secondary actually sounds more meaningful. 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Static page&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
9. Submit news seems useless. 
 
10. WordPress page is about premium plugins, why isn&#039;t it called premium plugins? 
 
11. Can&#039;t imagine anyone using ton of those search forms. 
 
12. Lifestream on about page mostly shows same link spammed to every possible social service. 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Index&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
13. Too many ads, tags and subscribe links. Area for actual excerpts is tiny and they are auto-generated which doesn&#039;t help visibility at all. 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Single post page&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
14. Too many of social/subscribe stuff again. Register for comment? I wonder if anyone bothers. 
 
15. Posts have plenty of graphics but close to none sub-headings and text formating. 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Sidebar&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
16. Google search says Google twice. 
 
17. Tag cloud is overkill and unusable. 
 
18. I mentioned that categories block is too complex and slow-working. 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Footer&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
19. Bottom line would look better centered. 
 
20. It says 2006-2008 but blog was only started in 2008? 
 
&lt;strong&gt;Overall&lt;/strong&gt; 
 
It looks like blog strives to have everything. Hundreds of social links to be social, hundreds of subscribe links to get tons of subscribers, dozens of ads to make pile of money. 
 
So do you get enourmous amount of traffic, subscribers and money from this? If not I think it&#039;s time to look for things that work and cut things that don&#039;t. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ok, got to it at last. New blog for me, fresh impressions.</p>
<p>First impression &#8211; and content is where?..</p>
<p>Second impression &#8211; oh, content is that tiny thing between the ads! <img src='http://www.bloggingtips.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p><strong>Answering questions</strong></p>
<p>1. It has too many stuff going on at the same time. Impression of a mess where you don&#39;t really see what is good and what is bad.</p>
<p>2. Sit with pencil and draw meaningful layout.</p>
<p>3. Page itself is reasonable but amount of script (31 script, 400+Kb) is not.</p>
<p>4. No. Categories block in sidebar is to dependent on script, at first I thought it was non-functional demo. Took it some time to start working. </p>
<p>Tags are overused, there is no system to them and too many similar ones. Recent post has three different variations with g1 for example.</p>
<p>Comparing to original theme header and footer areas that are supposed to help with navigation are changed to advertisement instead.</p>
<p>5. It&#39;s insane. I counted eleven huge ad blocks on home page. On post pages more reasonable but still ad-heavy.</p>
<p><strong>General notes</strong></p>
<p>6. Doesn&#39;t validate. And it&#39;s not like usual few things missing, it&#39;s like over three hundred errors. <a href="http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://tomuse.com/" rel="nofollow">http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://tomuse.c&#8230;</a>  </p>
<p>7. Scripts. It took few minutes for browser to finish digesting scripts and actually start working as intended.</p>
<p>8. It kinda has two taglines and secondary actually sounds more meaningful.</p>
<p><strong>Static page</strong></p>
<p>9. Submit news seems useless.</p>
<p>10. WordPress page is about premium plugins, why isn&#39;t it called premium plugins?</p>
<p>11. Can&#39;t imagine anyone using ton of those search forms.</p>
<p>12. Lifestream on about page mostly shows same link spammed to every possible social service.</p>
<p><strong>Index</strong></p>
<p>13. Too many ads, tags and subscribe links. Area for actual excerpts is tiny and they are auto-generated which doesn&#39;t help visibility at all.</p>
<p><strong>Single post page</strong></p>
<p>14. Too many of social/subscribe stuff again. Register for comment? I wonder if anyone bothers.</p>
<p>15. Posts have plenty of graphics but close to none sub-headings and text formating.</p>
<p><strong>Sidebar</strong></p>
<p>16. Google search says Google twice.</p>
<p>17. Tag cloud is overkill and unusable.</p>
<p>18. I mentioned that categories block is too complex and slow-working.</p>
<p><strong>Footer</strong></p>
<p>19. Bottom line would look better centered.</p>
<p>20. It says 2006-2008 but blog was only started in 2008?</p>
<p><strong>Overall</strong></p>
<p>It looks like blog strives to have everything. Hundreds of social links to be social, hundreds of subscribe links to get tons of subscribers, dozens of ads to make pile of money.</p>
<p>So do you get enourmous amount of traffic, subscribers and money from this? If not I think it&#39;s time to look for things that work and cut things that don&#39;t.</p>
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		<title>By: Kevin</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294399</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 14:37:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Navjot: 
Thanks for your constructive criticism.  I &quot;hate&quot; it when people jump to conclusions but then again, I remind myself that I am not perfect either and then I am humbled by my own thoughts and words. 
 
Any other problems with my theme? </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Navjot:</p>
<p>Thanks for your constructive criticism.  I &quot;hate&quot; it when people jump to conclusions but then again, I remind myself that I am not perfect either and then I am humbled by my own thoughts and words.</p>
<p>Any other problems with my theme?</p>
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		<title>By: Navjot Singh</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294349</link>
		<dc:creator>Navjot Singh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 12:24:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I was not harsh...but I hate when people can come up with staggering feed counts on new blogs. That&#039;s why I may have sounded rude. Thanks for removing the feed image. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was not harsh&#8230;but I hate when people can come up with staggering feed counts on new blogs. That&#39;s why I may have sounded rude. Thanks for removing the feed image.</p>
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		<title>By: Kevin</title>
		<link>http://www.bloggingtips.com/2008/11/25/reader-blog-critique-tomusecom/#comment-294338</link>
		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Nov 2008 11:47:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I removed the default feed button.  Please let me know if you see any other problems with this theme.  Thanks! </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I removed the default feed button.  Please let me know if you see any other problems with this theme.  Thanks!</p>
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